Missing You...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem written from the heart for a loved one deeply missed.

Missing You
I’m missing you…where have you gone, why aren’t you here?
I’m missing you…all has turned dark, though once was so clear.
I’m missing you…a soul so fragile it shatters, can’t you hear it?
I’m missing you…a heart crumbles with unbearable loss, can’t you feel it?
I’m missing you…my world grows dim; your light no longer shines for me.
I’m missing you…a life in turmoil, longing, searching for the chance to be set free.
I’m missing you…when will these tears wash away the insufferable pain?
I’m missing you…will my spirit’s cry go unanswered by you, doomed to search in vain?
I’m missing you…and though you may never return to me, lives never to be the same,

I am missing you…and deeply imbedded in my heart, your presence will forever remain.

~ZoeyGirl  10/21/08

Submitted: October 22, 2008

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So sad...but a great poem...pain almost always makes for a great piece of work..since it brings on such strong emotions! Sorry for the pain you have suffered but it will make you stronger. Great work.

Wed, October 22nd, 2008 3:24am


Thank you. Though the pain isn't as bad as the poem makes it seem. My dear friend is still on Earth, just far away

Tue, October 21st, 2008 8:39pm


It's odd reading this without the background now xD I always pause to read it on your page every time I pass, it never fails to amaze me how well you captured it all

Sun, October 26th, 2008 2:09pm


Hehehe, I'm just gald he liked it. He wants a 'Happy' poem now.. He never gets 'full' of our love for him

Sun, October 26th, 2008 10:45pm


I really like this
kind of like how i'm feeling now

i really adore this poem though



Tue, November 18th, 2008 4:38pm

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