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"I think of you so much it tires me, wearing me down to the core" Read More

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"We were crossed for a reason which is still unknown" Read More

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"Your theft of my heart somehow made me feel complete" Read More

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He's in my mind constantly, what more can I do besides write about him? Crazed thoughts and sleepless nights without him are enough to break me. Read More

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Tatsuya isn't like the other students at the magic city of Arcanium. He is trying to the impossible; mastering every class of magic. Grand battles between Gods, Devils, humans at things that fall under every other category plague his life. Looking for a fitting death, Tatsuya fights his way to… Read More
hi guys, girls and anything or anyone else on this site, since i'm on my summer holidays at the moment, i thought I'd try doing something that I've never done before, so i wrote a short story that could potentially form the base of a story or something similar if… Read More
Outlast is my revised, re-edited version of Zombies Attack. I have restarted with what you would read on the back of the book. Based on the feedback I will continue to rework my writing. I already have some redone and it will be shared shortly. But, here is an insiders… Read More
Luke likes to paint, and he may just be slightly insane. Read More

Poem / Memoir

December 16, 2014

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You see each and every life has a true imprint in themselves. When you look into those dissecting into infinite bundles and translating languages into merit, do you really make challenges afloat before always? You may even have worst experience, nonacceptance with anyone yet you know that you are so… Read More

Book / Action and Adventure

July 20, 2014

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So, I started writing this book a while ago. It's about two humans, names Max and Dylan, their life, and their struggles. I honestly hate writing summaries, so just read it if you'd like. Read More

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My first song. I hope you guys like it! Read More
A short piece outlining a handful of characters, a few ideas and a pretty badly bolted-on story. Not looking for fame and glory, but definitely looking for as much feedback as possible; pull no punches. Please take 2 minutes out of your day and leave me some advice, cheers. Read More
The early stages of my book series "The Writer's Academy", which is based off of the series "Avatar: The Last Airbender". Read More
This is a writing survey I wrote and I would love your feedback on it.:):) Read More
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This is a draft of a story im working on please leave feedback Haru was visited by a demon needing him for a tournament for the throne of hell he is quickly dragged of too war and bloodshed Read More

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This is the first draft of the short gothic story I had to write for my AS English Language and Literature coursework. I would appreciate any feedback, opinions, comments, etc. on how to make it better, if you think it reflects the gothic style genre and if not how to… Read More

Poem / Poetry

November 11, 2013

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I realllyyyy wanted to call this poem Missing you but Booksie wouldn't allow me :(. So, I decided to settle for Title's on The Poem in surrender of my unsuccessful attempt at giving the title name. Thanks for reading and feel free to comment :) Thanks! :D Read More

Poem / Poetry

November 02, 2013

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Farewells and longings for loved ones gone and lost. Short poem. Thanks for reading :) Feedback is much appreciated, desired and welcomed :) Read More

Poem / Poetry

September 27, 2013

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Wrote this from the top of my head, sorry if it's sorta messy :P About two neighbors who have never seen each other before but met through song and music. Feedback would be much appreciated :) Thanks for reading!! :D Read More

Poem / Poetry

September 18, 2013

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My opinion about true beauty. About the age we will all reach soon enough as time goes by, what they represent and how we try to get rid of them when we shouldn't at all - We are all beautiful as ourselves, no matter what we look, and we should… Read More

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Just a little sensual poetry for all you readers out there. Hope you enjoy :) I would also love some feedback if you guys would like to give it :) Comment if you wish. I'd love to hear how I could perhaps improve and on what you think on this… Read More

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Kate Evens, personal assistant and struggling writer, is a woman with a secret. A secret she has spent most of her life protecting. Plagued by visions of one way glass, confining white walls, and a man she's never known, she is unable to cope with the mysteries beyond. Her whole… Read More
A skilled soldier Zero was chosen to carry out a mission to find out what happened in the star system Sector 13, planet Venatros. When Zero crash lands on the ghost planet he quickly realizes he's not alone. Zero must now find a way to get back home while defending… Read More
A skilled soldier named Zero is sent to the star system Sector 13 to planet Venatros. A recent ghost planet. Just wiped out from the galaxy. When Zero crash lands on the planet he discovers that it is still somewhat populated, but the humans have turned into mindless animals. With… Read More

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This is more of a blog than anything else. I only submitted it as an article because hardly anyone reads 'miscellaneous' and I think this comes pretty close to being an article... or column... I don't know. But please, read on! Read More
I really need to get some feedback on a script that i'm writing. it's about kids/teens and what it's really like, the terrifying losses and mental illness, adoption, wellfare, ect. ect. ect. I would love some feedback on this unfinished piece Read More

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Alexander Niles And Debora watson go to a mysterious island populated with dinosaurs,but then something goes horribly wrong and the fences short out . how will this play out will Niles and debora survive Read More

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Because it deserves to be said and read - and if we're lucky, taken to heart. And if you want to be a good writer, you should take it seriously. Read More

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