Book / Horror
Poem / Action and Adventure
Poem / Poetry
I'm a student currently enrolled in college for biology (yea i know, not english? the hell is he doing here?) I enjoy reading a ton and i've finally figured out how to put pen to paper and get some of my ideas out and express them the way that i want to. i'm mostly using this site to post unfinished works that i haven' finshed editing and I'm hoping to get some feed back and constructive critisim so that I can learn about what what I'm doing. thats where you all come in! I would love to hear what everyone thinks. the good, the bad, anything. If you think what I've done sucks tell me. if it's good make SURE to tell me :) I'll do my very best to update as often as possible but your feed back is essential to me :) thanks so much for taking your time out of your day to read this :)
If you enjoy the book so far and want to keep updated follow me on twitter @24paperwings and at sharenator.com user name 24paperwings :) (i know shocker that i have the same screen name for all thre right?) ;)
on a kind of IMPORTANT side note why do people come on here to advertise their own posts? if you're going to do that at least have the courtesy to read my work before hand and tell me what you think instead of just saying oh hi can you come read this? at least give me a reaon like ice or revera did and say i may be interested because i like wolves or it a horror story or something. I will NOT come read anything someone posts to my wall unless they express a reason i should. hell i'll settle for to edit or that they think i may be able to offer advice. If i stumble on your work i will make sure i read it through and give a real opinion and tell you what i think about how it could be better before saying anything about my own work. doing it any other way is basically spam. this is seriously one of my biggest pest peeves on the site... (sorry about this i know it seems a bit overboard but i don't like it when people come on here and just ask me to read their stuff without offering to read mine. i find it a bit impolite, it's kinda like saying to a stranger "oh hey can i borrow fifty bucks and never pay you back?")
btw i know the poem sucks but i can't delete it so it's staying up i guess. anyway i would rather you guys read the story cause at least that doesn't suck lol
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