Hmm... so it would really be helpful if you guys could give more constructive criticism. I strive for excellence, and as the saying goes, two heads are better than one. So if anybody actually reads this, it would really mean a lot, even on older poems, if you could correct me and tell me what you didn't like. And please, be harsh. I find that pickier and harder to please people can be your best resources.
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