Greeting fellow writers and readers,
I am a old Druid(42's old right?) but I am ony a fledgling Writer. I have had a love for literature since I was nine. As a lifelong Artist, I have mastered pencil, paint, wood, stone,clay and tattoo gun. And writing to me is one of the most powerful of Art forms. I have no illusions, I know it will take time to master this artform as well. But the only way for me to advance in this new form is by being read. So, after checking out several sites dedicated to writing, I choose Booksie. I chose this site because of the sheer volume of talented writers I found.
And I Want Your Criticisms, let me put it this way. If my work makes you want to vomit, please tell me why it did. I am approaching writing like I approach a game of pool, when I play pool I try to find a player who will most certainly kick my ass in short order, just to be able to observe and learn. I am open to Brutal Honesty, so, All Advice Welcome.
FYI, The Crunch, my debut story is no where near it's final incarnation. Chapter 1 is already undergoing surgery . Think of it as a trial run at creating a cohesive and consistant world. And yes, not really a spoiler this, my feline race(Fehloni) is very Roman( pre-Imperial Rome) mostly, there are other feline cultures outside of the Republic. And the canine race(Caynns) is more varied depending on breed. For an example, the GyrDayn and the Rotts are the species equivalent of Vikings. And with that I will say no more.
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