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cretinlord

Location: United Kingdom

Member Since: May 2016

Last online: June 2017

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Last Updated Jun 01, 2016

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Quick update:

So, for all of those people who I have promised to review their work, I am on holiday from the 6th - 16th without internet, so I'll be unable to do so until after then. Sorry!

For those of you reading my story 'Phantom Nova', I have just released my third chapter and anyone who would like to help me and review it, I will come and check out your stuff, again once I'm back off holiday.

I have been getting some really good, constructive feedback recently so I'll be working on improvements while I am away. These include:

  • Over use of description when not necessary
  • Improvement of dialogue in the first two chapters
  • Repetition of words
  • Try and create a better flow, hopefully achieved by doing the things above.

Thanks again, and see you all soon!

Reviews:

Hi everyone! I am a firm believer in helping eachother out and so anyone who is generous enough to leave any feedback or reviews of my work I will return the favour. I will also do reading requests, just send me a quicky and when I have time I'll happily check out anything that you request. I'll try to get back as soon as possible, but if I don't, it's not because I have forgotten. I will try and give both positive and constructive feedback, as I personally would like the same to grow as a writer.

Stories:

Currently I am only working on one novel at the moment called Phantom Nova. If you would like to find out more about what the book is about then read the description below.

I will be planning on doing short stories, poems and scripts when I find the time so if that interests you then stick around.

Phantom Nova:

As strange events begin to plague the world, nearly everyone just passes them off as natural distasters, but for those who have been lucky, or unlucky, enough to survive know what really happened.

A select few people also know about what is truely happening, and in attempts to stop them they recrute the suvivors to The Compound.

The Compound houses those changed both mentally and physically, training and teaching those who have survived out to combat the Phantom Novas.

 


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Aspiring author, hoping to get feedback on my work as it progresses.

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