Ello, My name is lauren. Im a biginner poet. I write poetry about my feelings, mostly about a girl, or when my feelings are shattered at most. I've never really written poetry before, so I decided to go onto this site and let people comment. Please, if I'm at all good, tell me.
Over the years, I was a cheery person who never let anything over power my feelings.. Yet, Recently, a young lady named Sarah reached out her hand and showed me what the world was really like. I only saw most things as black and white, but with no "color". Most things weren't defined as much as they are now. After a while, I asked her to be my girlfriend, and as a big smile hung around my face, she gladly accepted my request. I was thrilled! I loved her with all of my heart. Everything was beautful in my world, even the people who tried to bring my life to its worst. Yet, after only a short time of being with her, She declinded me and ended our relationship (and friendship for a very long time in my life) It took several months to finally say my goodbyes to her as my heart did too.
It was a nearly a year until we became an acquaintance to each other. Through out the months we weren't communicating with each other... My heart slowly warmed up to try and reach out with each other once more, yet that didn't work out as much as I had planned. She declinded by listening to her "friends" who brought her down, slowly and painful. They tormented me with words so worthless in my mind. But, on 11/3/12, I met my love. Ethan. He is the most amazing thing I've ever had in my life. He understands me, and helps me when I shut myself out of the world. I try and help him too, yet it isn't my strong suit in life. His face is adorable and I can't get him out of my mind. He has had a few bad things happen to him in his past, but he accepts it and so do I. I just hope he keeps his promise as I will too, too always love me. Forever.
I hope I have showed you guys a little bit about my past. Hope you accept me as who I am!
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