I would like people to read my HSC Extension 2 major work and give me feedback on what to include. Note that there is an eight thousand word limit, so I have to cut this draft down substantially. However, if the story becomes popular enough, after the HSC I will complete the story, making an extended version, with greater detail as to the concept and characters. I will also flesh out the plot significiantly.
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