Fleur Elizabeth

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Fleur Elizabeth

Location: Johnstown, United States

Member Since: January 2009

Last online: July 2016

Open for read requests: Yes

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I am 30-years-old and working at becoming a young-adult, juvenile author.  I reside in Upstate New York, and yes it doesn't refer to Orange County (located just north of the City).  I live about half hour from the Mohawk River.

My interests other than writing are for me to know and others to find out.  If you're curious, leave a comment and I may, or may not respond.  However, I definitely won't respond without outside Booksie.com information for contacting.  :-P.

The comments I leave are based on more than 10-years of writing and 2 private writing courses I've taken over those multiple years.  Hence, I'm no idiot when it comes to writing.  Yes, I too make errors and despite how I may respond, to which I apologize now, I always welcome long, thought out comments depicting your opinions, therefore check out my work and leave something.  What I don't like are individuals who leave one or two word comments and are unable to back-up their thoughts if asked to expand their reasoning.  Sometimes even a short little comment like: Brilliant, or Horridly spoken: can say it all.  Please, just be ready for being asked to explain your thoughts.  Oh, another thing I hate: People guessing at what is happening next.  If you are curious what happens next, come back to see what else is posted at a future date.  Don't leave guesses about what is, or isn't going to happen in the future sections of my works.  Thanks.




For those looking for me to comment on their works, understand I comment and rank based on the following conditions out of 10 stars for each catagory: Grammar/Punctuation/Flow/Structure.... Overal Story..... Ability to Capture the Reader.... Word Choice/Effectiveness....  When I average my scores together, I than comment according to my thoughts... 10 out of 10 is pure perfection/masterpiece, 9 out of 10 is superb work, 8 out of 10 is decent, 7 out of 10 is a good piece, 6 out of 10 is above average, 5 out of 10 is average, 4 out of 10 is below average, 3 out of 10 is ok, 2 out of 10 is poor quality, 1 out of 10 is needs drastic work....

It is my belief that no matter who you are, all pieces of literature written may fall within one of these conditions; especially my own.  Do note that I never rank my individual catagories above a 7.  In fact, my work usually when all scores are averaged together fall between a 5 and 6...

Second, when I comment, I will often give examples to explain my points as I believe it is important for all writers to experience different writing styles and for those commenting to explain what their comments mean.  I will not be offended if people comment in a such a manor with my work.  Remember, they are merely suggestions, not a requirement.... Therefore, please do not ask me to comment if you are not willing to hear my thoughts and fully explaining my reason believing the way I do.


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