Maybe I have a knack for writing, maybe I don't. I would love to find out! I need real critisism on all aspects of my writing. If it's bad, tell me! Where can I improve?
I'm just kinda getting my feet wet here so please be honest.
Any feedback will be appreciated. Thank you in advance!
Edit: Thank you all who commented on the story and gave me advice. I tried my best to incorporate all the suggestions. I'll also try to make the next chapters better and spend a little more time on them so that they don't seem so rushed. Thanks again!
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