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Mastera

Location: Lihue, United States

Gender: M

Member Since: July 2014

Last online: September 2018

Open for read requests: Yes

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I'M ALIVE!

Sorry for the inactivity. I haven't had internet since January 3rd. (I just moved)

Reading requests are back open.

 

 

 

Anyone who is asking for me to read your works needs to read this disclaimer!

I do not sugar coat my responses. I provide critique and data that would help you improve your work. I'm not being hostile, I'm being honest. As such, I expect you to also be honest with my story. Being a good writer and being able to take criticism go hand in hand.

 

 

Let me just point out: if your story starts out solemn, then I garuntee you that I won't like it. Literally 90% of the stories I read on here start solemnly, and that just annoys me. I know you're trying to get me to feel empathetic, but it's just too cliche. So many people have done it, that it's not even empathetic anymore. So, if you want your series to be "good" then think of something that would grab my attention from the get go. 

 

 

If you are here to review "Emental" please review the chapters following Chapter 1. I have already recieved enough critique in that particular chapter, and I wish to recieve critique for the REST of the story. I still recommend you read Chapter 1, so you do not get lost in the story.

 

If you leave a comment that says my story has a grammar error, please, spare me, and tell me WHAT the grammar error is!

 

If you have any questions regarding the story, keep reading. All questions will be answered at SOME POINT in the story itself.

 

I am known as Mastera on here. I'm 21 years old and have been writing since I was in Kindergarten. I wasn't that good back then, but making funny / strange stories has always been one of my greatest strengths. Of those 15 years that I have been writing, 8 of them have been devoted to writing my story: Emental. Emental has been my only series that has lasted this long and I am very passionate about it. However I am also very sensitive about it since I don't take insults that regard it very kindly. I do wish for lots of critique as I have YET to find a person who doesn't like the story.

I am not a big fan of solemn stories about loss or death. Nor do I like romance, horror, or basically a story that revolves around "how [person]'s life changes when an event happens." Come on people, let's see some creativity.

If you have a funny story, or a story with lots of action and adventure, then I will most likely become one of your fans and await you to upload more chapters. However, since most of Booksie is about romance, dealing with life, etc, I am not expecting much.

 

Emental is meant for ages 12-21 and for people with a good sense of humor. 

 

With that said, I encourage all my readers to leave a comment about what they thought of Emental. Constructive criticism is welcome, insults are not. I expect all of you are mature enough to know the difference. The more comments I recieve, the better Emental will be when the entire series is completed.

 

Let's meet the characters!

 

Danny

What do you get when you combine a person who loves to have fun and mess around with boundless energy? A disaster I'm sure. Danny is all of those by the way. At 15 years old (It says he's 14 in the story, it's been changed) he is at the peak of his teen years. Full of life and looking for fun, and his electric magic is not helping as it only adds to his already hyper attitude.

 

Izzi

Danny's best friend and companion. She's not human, but she's not a pet. Izzi is a cute little Emental that has known Danny her entire life. The two of them are so close that they even share personalities, except that Izzi isn't that hyper. Izzi is very toned down compared to Danny, and also very smart. She's mostly quiet at serious times, preferring to listen, but don't get confused, she's a very down to earth person. Being 14 years old (She's not 12, like in the story) she exibits the same lust for fun like Danny, but at a more controlled temperment. For an unknown reason, Izzi uses black electricity as her magic.

 

Ken

Danny's other best friend, and room mate. Danny and Ken have been living together for as long as they can remember, which for Danny, doesn't span long for his memory. Ken however remembers quiet well, his home being destroyed by a volcanic eruption and him having to flee to Danny's house for a place to live. Ever since, he has acted like a father to Danny. He is very serious and compassionate. He cares very deeply for Danny and Izzi. But take into consideration he is 16 years old, so he sometimes will even join in on Danny's crazy antics. Ken's body temperature is almost 200 degrees farenheit due to his Pyro heritage. I'm sure you can guess his magic type.

 

Necrosse

An alien soldier who was forced to go to Earth with two missions. Necrosse is a loyal soldier for his captain, Sencrosse. However, their relationship might be strained due to this ruse. Necrosse has never shown any sort of magic capabilities, and no one seems to know what is under that mask of his. 

 

Zaneth

Boop

 

Sui

Shrouded in a bigger mystery than the Emental Stones, Sui is quite possibly the strongest awake being alive. His ice magic is fast and strong, much like his personality. He's cold and always does what needs to be done without question. However, he cares deeply for everyone and everything, going out of his way to save orphan children and give them new lives. Sui is shown to have superhuman strength and speed, but the extent of his powers is currently unknown.

 

 

"I'm not insane, my reality is just better than yours."

 

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