Ever since the first book i read, i've
wanted to be a writer.
If you have the time, check out my novel.
can't promise you'll like it.
I can promise you wont be dissapointed.
Oh, and please criticize
Good or bad, atleast i know where i'm heading.
i'll return the favor, just leave a comment asking.
thank's to all
READ IT, you know you want to d:
-and to me your exciting; chapter 6 available
“You're beautiful. Don't ever change, or i'm afraid i wont love you the same. I can't help but to smile when i see you Mina, youre the best thing that ever happened to me. You're the perfect woman for me. I'll make you happy, just watch.” He whispered into my ear. This was a risk, but i was in love. It's not something i want, but now that i have it, i don't think i'd ever go back. So i kissed him...and i got the reaction i wanted.
EXPERIMENT 143. chapters one&two avaliable.
So i first got the idea from my boyfriend's sister. she said "did you know babies can breathe underwater before they take their first breath of air. Ofcourse it isnt possible, but hey it gave me an idea.
So basicly Lilly and Eric, two babies taken
from their mothers to be held as science projects. The
scientist create a human/fish ego underwater for the two. Lilly
loves it with Owen. Owen who first started this whole mess with
his best friend William. William has Eric in another
science lab states away. The two friends parted their ways
due to different ideas. Each wanted to try new
things. You cant be friends with your
Eric is always planning to escape the
lab. So he can live like everyother human out there.
William chose to tell him about everything in the outside
Lilly loves it in the tanks. She loves
Owen as her father. She doesnt know much. No one
wanted to tell her about the outside world, in fear of loosing
her. Owen recently took another experiment named
Arial. He wanted to see just how natural Lilly's motherly
instincts were. To see if she was more human or more
Although Eric and Lilly are completly opposite,
they have many things in common. They were humans held
hostage. Taken to a lab and experimented on. Biggest
of all, they both had dry, scaly, gills on each side of their
stomach and right behind their ears. They can use their
lungs but only in the outside world. Under water they're
just a more human form of a mermaid. That's what Owen was
aiming for since this experiment begin.
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