Book / Romance
Hello, my name is Shantel I'm sixteen years old and I'm from Canada. I love to write in my free time and I am working on a book called 'Stalk Her' I would really appreciate if you gave me feed back on what you think of the story.
Here is the prologue of the story:
Sixteen year old Ally Thomas was a normal
teenage girl, until she got a stalker. She met Chase when she was
fourteen, and they quickly became friends. He told her she was
beautiful, and wonderful and after a week they were dating. Until
he started to get clingy. She broke up with him after a month,
but he still wouldn't leave her alone.
After two years of being paranaid that he was after her, she decided to move to a private school in New York where he would hopefully never bother her again. Of course she met the well known bad boy at her new school and soon she felt herself getting attracted to him whether she liked it or not. Ally and Brett are falling for each other it's to bad the school 'it' girl won't let them be together.
What will Ally and Brett do? And will Chase come back to stalk Ally or finally give up on her?
Please take the time to read and I really hope you aren't disappointed with the story!
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