It’s been a while since I was last
on booksie. I guess you could say boredom has brought me back,
that and I’m looking for a place I can publish both my poems and
stories. For those of you who don’t know me, SheaRyhai is my Pen
Name. You can call me that or Shea. Tes is the nick name my
friends know me by.
I am recently single. Enlisted in the US Army - I go to boot camp April 22. Military Intelligence.
I have one published work: The Rambles of SheaRyhai. This is a collection of my first poems written in 2009-2010.
I have one complete story that I mean to edit and publish: The Entertainment [This can be found on wattpad.com]
If you have Facebook and want to stay in touch or chat, add me: SheaRyhai@Facebook.com
First of all I generally do “review exchanges”. Meaning if you leave me a comment on my story I will return the favor as long as you let me know what story it is you would like me to read. Bare in mind, I will be as helpful in my feedback as you are. Read ‘How to Give Helpful Feedback’ for more info on that.
If you are looking for feedback, please know I tend to give very detailed critiques/reviews unless asked to do otherwise. I do not believe in shallow comments that do nothing but promote a writers ego. We are all capable of learning and taking from others. Unless you are a published and successful writer, you should be able to take criticism and suggestion with a open mind. What you use is up to you.
I do not read fan-fiction, simply because I prefer to read original works. That way all praise goes to the deserving creator. Other then that I am open to anything except ‘Erotic’ works, they are simply not to my taste.
If someone gives you a review and recommends changes, do yourself a favor and apply them. Don’t sit there and ask why people haven’t gotten past the 2nd chapter of your story. Take that as a sign the first few chapters need to be improved and keep editing till it pays off.
I will be posting stories both old and new, you can find a list of their names below:
[Please keep in mind that stories not listed in my Featured section are probably going
to be rewritten, or heavily edited since they are a few years old. If you’re looking for
something to read search my Featured Stories first, Thank You]
Grimoire Girl (2011) [Paranormal/Thriller]
Trials of Cynthia Greenfield (2009) [Fantasy/Thriller]
(this is the rewrite of Diary of Rachael Black. I changed the title and am now writing the story in third person instead of first)
Believe in Me (2012) [Drama/Romance]
Kiss Me Before I Die (2011) [Science-fiction/Romance]
Unpardonable Sins (2002) [Historical/Mystery/Suspense/Romance]
Witch Eye (2010) [Fantasy/Adventure]
Veil of Deceit (2010) [Fantasy/Suspense/Thriller]
(previously known as Scarlett’s Garden)
When Death Smiles (2010) [Werewolf/Vampire/Adventure]
You Don’t Want Me Back. Trust Me (2011) [Romance/Drama]
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