Hello everyone my name is Sunshine Raines
I have writen a few short stories and would like to get the opioin of other writers on them
Don’s life was an A-typical life, until one night a stranger came to visit. Unasked and unannounced he presented Don with a gift… or was it a curse.
We did this, we caused all of this to happen. We blocked out the sun, now we lived in darkness. Things were different with out the sun, flowers did not grow, trees began to die, and the oxygen was starting to dissipate. Even us humans were beginning to take on different characteristics.
How much longer can we take this, how much longer can we survive. We wondered every day if this would be our last. Would we ever see daylight again, or were we doomed to live in darkness for the rest of our days
The night was calm not a cloud in the sky. The stars shown bright and the moon had an ominous glow about it. It seemed the world was at peace, but I was hungry. I am a Vampire, I live in Jersey City just a stones throw away from New York City. My name, is Craig.
I am open to all critiques and want to know your true thoughts. Thanks to all who read and special thanks to those who are kind enough to leave a comment.
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