Last Updated Mar 03, 2017
Chapter 4 of Whiskey is up and ready to read! I didn't have much time to edit this week so hopefully the first draft doesn't have too many errors! -Suz
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Beating The Player
My Favourite Comment(s) so far:
Comment left by Jola on "Always On My Mind" "Ye Gods! I really walked into that one. The mysterious girl is supposedly the reader - me?? If you could see who I am, that would give you a good laugh. I read one of your stories because I didn't entirely agree with advice you gave ShadaStorm about adding more description. To be fair, I thought I should sample your work to see how you handle it. Although you included some non-essential description, it wasn't overdone and it did not bore me.. On the contrary, you wrote an interesting story very well. As it turned out at the end, the joke was on me, Ha-ha. I guess descriptive prose is like cake; it can enhance a story, but can be sickening if you get too much of it. Your cake was just about right."
Comment left by Jonathan DeLacuso on "Always On My Mind" "So this is what you consider just a draft??? This is freaking amazing. I mean yeah the girl isn't revealed but that just makes it that much better. You keep her in the shadow shrouded by this cloak of mystery and beauty that this femme fatal brings into Luke's life. The details in this 'draft' were OMG unbelievabely amazing. Every teenie ttiny detail was exploited to the maximum potential. Where in My reality you went out of your way to exploit the psychological torment of your character in a fearsome and somewhat grotesque way, here you exploited it on a beautifully magical way. Although I wil admit that some scenes seemed a bit shall we say creepy, I still could see what his character was going through. Love at first sight made him blind. I just wish that these femme fatal isn't a blood sucking succubus and doesn't crush him. Anyways I really loved this wotk almost as much as My reality. Bravo my friend. Bravo!"
Comment left by PoeticMe143 on "Always On My Mind" "Wow, wow had to be the first word to start this comment off. First somewhere between the second or third paragraph the story started feeling like I was sitting down reading this out of a published book! I mean everything from start to finish was perfect and I don't see how anyone can criticize this because this story is simply perfection!! If this was a novel I would certainly read it all the way through. I loved how you added some humor parts in here, like when Nolan (I believe it was Nolan) said "she's probably a guy waiting to fu*king kill you." I laughed at that part :D! I really did enjoy the read and thanks a million for the request. You're sooooo talented I'm getting jealous, naw joking about the jealous thing but you are very talented and this deserves sooo much more reads and comments. I'm just completely wowed by this story it's so PERFECTLY WRITTEN. More then awesome job!! Please keep me updated in your work cause you're amazing!! ~Poetic (P.S love how in love Luke is, it's so cute!)"
Cry From Inside by Lisa Ayers- this novel will give you shivers! Seriously an amazing piece of work centered on the treatment of people who are limited and sent "away".
The Walking Game by Ghost of the Rain- you'll have some catching up to do, but it's worth it. A mix between Avatar and Divergent, her characters will grab you and pull you into a story you can't put down!
"Mer" by Puppet- this short story puts a new theory of everything you think you've known. Similar to the tales of Native American people, this story is worth the read!
"Stay Basil" by dclovesfd- this poem is one of the best romance poems I've ever read. The perfect description of laying in bed with the perfect person!
Stolen By Wolves by Incaylable- Oh my goodness, this short novel of 6 chapters kept me reading and on the edge of my seat the entire time. Incredibly written and a complete masterpiece from the writing style to the plot. The most amazing and terrifying endings ever!
Containment Trial by Arid Land Kate- This is the perfect mix of action, adventure, love, political conspiracy, suspence, confusion, and sci fi/fantasy. CHECK THIS OUT!!! You'll catch up fast as there's not many chapters yet. You get thrown tons of curveballs that just leave you on the edge of your seat!
Is Anyone Here Anymore? by D A Draven- This is a short story that will entice you from the beginning. I am always amazing at Draven's knack for creating short stories that give you chills and leave you craving more. He's an artist in the horror category and although I only mentioned this short story, read his others, you won't regret it. His work is not for the faint of heart or those who can't appreciate a poetic way of expression.
Austin is in her first year of university. Her life consists of work, school, organisation, and her best friend. Things seem to be going for her until she ends up in a very unlikely relationship.
The Lost and Lonely (Poem)
This is my first poem. I don't normally write poetry, in fact, I NEVER do. I don't even really like it unless it's a really well done piece. Some phrases just popped into my head and I started writing. I hope you can get the overall message and meaning of the poem (:
Beating The Player (At His Own Game) COMPLETE (novel)
Nicole knows she's not a part of the "popular group" in her school. When she suddenly starts becoming friendly with one of the popular guys, coincidentally her next door neighbor, she gets an insight into what it's like to be them. The only concerining question is who should you trust?
Cover is by Agnesmok99. A huge thank you to her!!! (:
Dreaming Up Reality (short story)
This is one of my most teasured and prized pieces. Words cannot begin to describe how much I love this story. There is no summary, not one that I want to write anyway. It is a horror story, depending on your definition.
"Always On My Mind" (short story)
**This has reached over 300 views!!!! A small feat for most writers, but for unpopular ones like me, it's Christmas!!! :) **
An unusual romance story. Luke's fallen hard for a mysterious and mystical woman...
My BooksieSilk Work
High (short story) **This has reached over 300 reads literally over night!!!!!!! We're now at over 3000!!! I cannot believe it!!**
Describes the first time of a green-eyed, brown haired woman with a male lover. Sexual content, not intended for minors.
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