Book / Fantasy
Book / Fantasy
Miscellaneous / Fantasy
Hey, I'm Jo, I'm from England and I've been writing stories on my laptop for years now. I've got more than 30 but I've kind of abandoned most of them without bothering to delete them. I love writing, but I'm too shy to show any of my work to my friends so I decided to post it on here for you guys to read and hopefully provide some constructive criticism (but don't just tell me it's crap, that's really not helpful).
I mainly read fantasy, so that's what I write, and most of my books are from a teenage and generally a female perspective because that's the viewpoint I find it easiest to write from because, funnily enough, I am a teenage girl. Some of my stories are set in the real world (some of them happen partly in the USA and I've probably made a bajillion mistakes about that because I've never actually been there but New York seemed like a cool place for my characters to go so please don't get mad at me if I got something wrong, just let me know and I'll change it :D ) and some of them are set in worlds I've made up myself.
I don't really write in chapters, so I'll just post whenever I write a big chunk. I'm always going back, rereading my work and changing it because a lot of the time the first time I write it it's a bit crap, most of the time when I'm editing it doesn't change any of the plot points, it's just makes it flow a bit better, but occasionally there might be some small tweaks to the storyline so if there's suddenly a massive change I've probably gone back and changed it somewhere earlier on.
Basically, if you have anything you wanna say about my writing please let me know because I'm always looking to improve it and I know I've made a bunch of mistakes, I don't mind constructive criticism but don't just say it's crap, let me know why you think it's crap and I'll work on it.
Hope you guys all like my work, and I look forward to reading yours :) I am open to reading requests, and always happy to comment some feedback as long as you can return the favour, but I have two rules:
1. It must be reasonably well written in terms of spelling and grammar - if something isn't actually in English because your spelling is so bad then I will not read it because it will make me want to cry
2. No poetry please - I'm not really a poem person so I don't think my comments would be particularly useful
[x] get 100 reads on the first chapter of a novel
 get 200 reads on the first chapter of a novel
 get 500 reads on the first chapter of a novel
[x] get 500 reads total on a novel
 get 1000 reads total on a novel
[x] get 10 fans
[x] get 20 fans
 get 50 fans
 finish a novel
 finish two novels
 (I know this one's a long shot) get on the home page
If you've followed my two rules I'll happily read your work and comment some feedback - I look forward to reading it and I can't wait to see where you guys take me :)
NOTE: it may take me a while to get around to reading any requests at the moment because I am in the run up to my exams so I have lots of revision to do and I also have work experience next week. After June 18th my exams will be over for the year so I hope I will then be able to catch up on reading requests and I aim to update Aislinn once a week over the summer.
Look I made a rainbow!
You bitches better appreciate it this took me fucking ages :)
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