Short Story / Science Fiction
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Hey, I'm Todd.
I am an unemployed 30yr old male, and enjoy spending some of my time writing up my ideas. Kiss Me, Kill Me is the second story I have ever completed, and it's the first story I have shared with people.
So Kiss Me, Kill Me is the first short story in a trilogy I wrote and should be read first. Sven makes '00' rank, is the second short story tho a prequel should be read second. The third story Sven jumps through time, is an alternative narration of some of the events that took place in the previous 2 stories. The third story explains details of events that couldn't be shared in the previous stories as it would have broken the pace and structure I felt.
I really want feed back (constructive criticism) so I can improve my writing.
If you don't like my writing, please feel free to tell me what you didn't like about it.
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