Book / Action and Adventure
Book / Action and Adventure
Poem / Poetry
Welcome to my profile, you can call me
Birthdate: 9th of February the year 2000
I would like it if, when you read my stories for you to comment and tell me my mistakes, the good and the bad parts about the story, don't just try and be nice and write "nice story" I would rather you tell me what you really think without any offensive language.
When you give me a reading request, I may not read it straight away as I can be quite busy sometimes.
(If you are a bully please read this)
Message To All The Bullies On This Planet
That boy you punched in the hall today; committed suicide a few minutes ago. That girl you called a slut in class today; she's a virgin. That boy you called lame; has to work every night to support his family. That girl you pushed down the other day; is already being abused at home. You think you know them! Guess what, you don't!
Copy and Paste this to your profile if you are against the mean bullying. I bet 99% of you won’t.
Favourite People on Booksie so far:
ShadaStorm120: She is a good artist as well as a good story writer, a nice and caring person with a great personality as well as a great sense of humour, I have read all her currently published chapters of her novel EmberSpring, it is an amazing story with a great storyline and her characters are so memorable. She an awesome person to have around and if you haven’t already, you should check out her work and give her a fan request.
Peacemaker06: Peacemaker is a nice person and always gives me amazing feedback on my stories whenever I publish a new one, or just a new chapter. He has been very kind to me on this site and I promise I will get around to reading some of his work.
Shaiyegray230: I just thought I would mension Shaiyegray here because Shaiyegray is nice and gives great feedback, also Shaiyegray has an amazing story called Crisis, it's 100 chapters long and from what I've seen it's quite action packed and is a great story.
GhostOfTheRain: GhostOfTheRain is an expert at collab novels and events, she really knows how to take collaborations to the next level and ontop of that she is an amazing writer, I promise I'll get around to reading her novel 'The Walking Game,' which she wrote.
AnarchyBlues: AnarchyBlues is an amazing friend to have, I am currently writing a collab event made by GhostOfTheRain, and I am working with AnarchyBlues. I couldn't have asked for a better person to work with during the collab.
Tyler: Tyler, or Ty as some call him has become a close friend of my sister ShadaStorm120 and even though I haven't spoken to Ty often, he's still a great person, with good intension.
RaechelleAdams: Another really close friend of ShadaStorm120. I have heard many good things about Raechelle, she gives really good advice from what I've seen, also she's really nice.
MagicalForest: MagicalForest is my sister. She hopes to animate a series and I wish her the best of luck in animation.
Crowley: I didn't meet Crowley that long ago, but he still deserves a place here, Crowley has been nice to me, and his story Grim: A Reaper's War is amazing, and I would recommend for everyone to read it.
To all these writers who have earned a place on my profile, congratulations, you all deserve it and a lot more. So keep up the good work, and don’t stop believing in yourself, because I believe you can get through anything if you try hard enough.
Current Story: The Last Light
The story I'm going to be working on is called The Last Light. It's about a man named Zithin Nitrizite who is attacked by a strange enemy, made of darkness. The enemy threatens to devour all light in the world seemingly plunging it into never ending darkness. Zithin realises the danger and tries to stop the enemy, but just trying to reach the enemy, has its obstaclles, and can you really kill darkness itself?
I wasn't completely happy with my story Voidtainium, while I enjoyed writing it, and liked the plot. I felt as though the story itself wasn't as good as I wanted, so I've begun this story as a way to sharpen up my writing skills and test out a different style of writing. One of the things I noticed with Voidtainium, was too much talking, as too much can stop the story from being very good, so in this story, I won't be using much dialog when characters speak. There will however be some talking, but I'm keeping it to a minimum.
The prologue for The Last Light is out, and I'm hoping for as many people to read it as possible.
Note I will continue and rework Voidtainium at a later date, but I want to improve my writing before hand so that I can make Voidtainium better.
Thank you for reading my profile and I hope you enjoy your day.
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