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I Have Quit Booksie:
I'm sorry to my fellow dedicated readers but I have quit booksie if that wasnt apparent already. I feel as if I've accomplished my goal which was to share my writing with the world and improve. I've just felt as if I lost my touch. I write dark stuff not the type of teen crap that Kissing Death has become into (sorry to those who like it but I'm the author and I feel like a failure producing something I swore I wouldnt). For some of you have been with me since the beginning, my first summary was all I know is that I'm going to make the romance between a vampire and human evil again. Well I'm rewriting the novel with new characters and in third person (I seem to write more professional like in third person) and believe me that I will not lose sight of my goal. Anyway here is the ending of Kissing Death even though there were only like two or three chapters left (lol). I'm sad that such a hot name like Ricky had to go to waste. Also REMEMBER: This is still my work. Plagerism and/or fan fiction is not permitted to ANYONE. I DESPISE plagerism. You have no idea how much I have to deal with my friends "tweaking" my ideas and putting them into their stories just to get a good grade in English. I'm not dealing with that shit in booksie a place that I didn't even WANT to post my writing onto until someone told me it was safe and everything on here was copyright. Inconsiderate jerks who can't even write their own work should go find something they can do (besides obviously plagerism which anyone can do lol). Ok then so have a good life :)
Candy surrenders and walks over to Drew and Josh when suddenly a door to her left opens and grabs her so fast she can't even utter a suprised scream. Inside was Ricky, hiding the whole time. She's pissed. They get into an argument. Basically the house is surrounded and Drew and Josh are trying to knock down the door. Ricky tells Candy something along the lines of I'm getting out of here and if you want to just sit there and pout go ahead. She reluctantly follows him. They go to the bathroom built into his bedroom. He bangs the wall twice and and a stairwell appears. Candy is awestruck, causing Ricky to have to push her forward as he explains that his house wasn't always a house but a laboratory (obviously that's spelled wrong). Unfortunately while Ricky is pushing Candy along, he forgets to close the stairwell. When Josh and Drew finally get the door down, with Josh suffering a very, very sore shoulder, they search around the room finally working their way to the bathroom. Well when you see a huge ass hole in the wall and a stairwell of course you're going to go down it while you're hunting for someone(s). Eventually they all meet up and Ricky throws himself in the line of fire, telling Candy to run. She hesitates just a second but that being enough time to see Drew stab Ricky in the chest. She forces herself to turn around, despite hearing Ricky's screams as they stab him again and again and again (Josh is holding Ricky still barely which is why he couldn't chase after Candy). She runs home, where her mom is out, crying. She screams over and over again as she mourns. Finally wiping her bloodshot eyes she goes to the bathroom, fills up the tub. She handcuffs her hands behind her back (believe me possible and the handcuffs were a birthday party gift), takes one sleeping pill, and lays down in the tub as it slowly fills around her. Breathing in the water into her lungs, she changes her mind but can't properly swim up. She loses consciousness and soon after dies. Before dying, she sees Jack and he asks her what she's done to herself since the dream doesn't look right. The dream fades away before she can tell him. THE END. The ending was perfect in case I decided not to do a sequel. If I did then it would start off with Jack rushing to her house to save Candy. Epilogue: It is revealed that Drew was possessed by Sam.
I believe that when life gives you lemons, you should make orange juice and leave everyone to think how the hell you did that.
Oh and my bestest friends here: haileymorgann she paid me to say that I:
A MESSAGE TO EVERYONE ASKING ME TO READ THEIR WORK- I'm not taking reading requests and basically if you ask me, I'm deleting your comment. Even some reading requests that I've taken I will not follow through on because I don't have the time. In conclusion, very few novels/stories/poems will be read by me. I think it's rather fair since I don't spam anymore for various reasons. But if you want to just ignore this message and go for it then well more power to you.
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